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It is difficultfor people in cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be takento solve the problem? (2020/7/9)

城市居民身體鍛煉不夠的原因及解決辦法

審題與解析

本題為原因分析題，問城市居民為什麼得不到足夠的身體鍛煉？考生可以從物質、心理和社會三個方面去尋找原因。比如：

原因1：城市居民工作壓力很大，往往需要加班，因此找不到時間來鍛煉 （物質原因）

原因2：城市裡人口多，體育設施不足，很多人找不到鍛煉的地方（物質原因）

原因3：城市裡有很多其他娛樂方式，導致很多人不願意投入身體鍛煉（心理原因）。

解決方法：

（1）城市裡增加體育設施，比如在公園裡安裝體育設備。

（2）提醒人們身體鍛煉的重要性，提倡每天花一小時鍛煉。

高分範文

The lack of physical exercise has been a serious problem for many city dwellers. I think three factors are responsible for this phenomenon.

In the first place, the pressure of living in big cities sometimes deprives people of the opportunity to do physical exercise. To support their family, they often have to work extra hours even on weekends or after they get back home. For these people, the time for physical exercise is just a luxury they are able to afford.

Another important factor is that the sports facilities in many cities are not readily available to all who need them. The trouble to find a place for physical exercise discourages a lot of city dwellers from participating in physical activities.

Finally, as cities provide a great variety of ways of entertainment, many people are not really willing to devote their time to physical exercise. On the contrary, they are more attracted to online games, music concerts, and shopping malls, to name only a few.

As physical exercise is so essential for our health, we need to figure ways out of the present situation. The most effective way, in my view, is to have more sports facilities installed in public places such as parks so that people can have some exercise even when they are just taking a walk with their family members. Another way to encourage people’s participation in physical exercise is to build the parking lots at least one mile away from the metro station, so people have to walk two miles when they get to and off work every day.

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