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說到Dodo bird,大家一定不會陌生,這算是托福題中出鏡率較高的常客之一了,今天的這篇綜合寫作真題【🔗2021.8.28線下剛剛考過】,就是關於它的。不過,子睿要提醒大家——即使自己對某個話題已經比較熟悉,也不要輕視與此話題相關的考題,因為托福考試不考背景知識,只考基於英文的學術交流能力(the ability to use English to communicate in an academic environment),其本質在於交流,即準確的理解+輸出。

以本題為例,各位在解題時將會遇到如下挑戰:
1. 是否能從閱讀中提取關鍵信息(select important info)
2. 是否能將閱讀中的關鍵信息轉寫成簡單易懂的筆記(這點對能否成功預判聽力內容並記出有效的筆記有決定作用,不要簡單地以為「覺得自己看懂了或者聽懂了」就行,考官判斷我們懂不懂,全看我們的summary寫得如何)
3. 能否聽懂文章並記下筆記【本文的聽力不簡單,試試^^(下圖為之前模考團同學對此題的反饋)】
4. 能否將閱讀和聽力當中未按相同順序排布的信息準確對應並寫出well-organized summary

只有這些都做到了,考官才會認為我們確實「看懂且聽懂」了,並且給出令大家滿意的評分。藉助這篇文章,子睿希望能夠提醒大家寫作和口語的答題就像是輸入通關密碼,除了內容要準確,我們組織內容的方法和順序也很有講究。本文配有範文,可供大家參考學習,如果需要更多幫助,近期正在進行的口語、寫作提分班標配了作業點評和細緻講解,歡迎各位隨時加入,快速殺托!

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寫作真題不惑 03【Integrated Writing】
202.8.28下午場線下托福考題【提分班原題】

托福綜合寫作
Testing Format 考試形式
1. Read the passage and take notes (3 min)
2. Listen to the lecture and take notes (only play once)
3. Summarize the relationship between 1 & 2 (20 min)
The Reading Passage:

The dodo was a large, flightless bird native to the Island of Mauritius in the Indian Ocean. Mauritius was colonized by the Dutch settler in the late sixteenth century, and, fewer than one hundred years later, the last dodo disappeared. There is much speculation as to why the dodo disappeared, but experts have narrowed the reasons down to the actions of humans.

There were no humans on Mauritius prior to the Dutch’s arrival, so the dodos had no fear of humans and thus were easily hunted. The Dutch also brought other animals, such as cats, dogs, pigs, and various farm animals, and there were many instances where these animals hunted dodos and destroyed their eggs and nests. The dodo, being flightless, built its nests on the ground in forested areas and laid its eggs in these nests. The eggs and young dodos therefore had no protection against predators.

When the Dutch colonized Mauritius, they began rapidly altering the land for farming. They cleared forests, which destroyed the dodo’s natural habitats. The dodos soon had fewer places to make their nests and lay their eggs. Also, since the dodo fed on the tropical fruits native to the island, when the Dutch chopped down the trees, a large part of the dodo’s food supply was destroyed.

Some also speculate that the outsiders introduced a disease which proceeded to wipe out the dodos. Some diseases may pass form humans to animals, or, more commonly, from animal to animal. This will account for the virtually overnight disappearance of the dodos. The introduction of a new species often wreaks havoc on the natives. When the European settlers arrived in America, many Native Americans died due to a lack of immunity to new diseases. The same could easily have happened to the dodo.

Now Listen to part of a lecture

on the topic you just read about:


Question:
Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well you response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific arguments presented in the reading passage.

自己練習完

再看下面範文哦!

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Sample Response:

參考範文(子睿老師):

The passage and the lecture both discuss the reasons for the extinction of Dodos. According to the passage, the dodos were killed off by humans; however, the professor claims that dodos declined as a species naturally.


The author suggests that since dodos did not fear humans, they could be easily hunted and thus declined quickly. But the professor claims that although dodos could be easily caught, humans did not try to hunt or kill them at all, for their meat was tough and bad-tasting, so humans did not cause their extinction.


The passage indicates that dodo’s population was decreased by humans who destroyed their food supplies by cutting down trees. Nevertheless, the professor points out that even when the last dodo was spotted in 1662, large part of island remained its original condition. Also, since dodos did not rely on trees like many other birds do, the clearing of tree was not the reason for the decrease of their numbers.


The author believes that the dodos were killed by diseases brought by humans because of a lack of immunity, and their nests and eggs could also be destroyed by the farm animals that humans brought. On the contrary, the professor argues that it could be nature itself which destroyed dodos. Many others birds had survived after the arrival of humans, and there is evidence that big winds struck the island many times in the past, and they could be the reason for the destroyed nests and eggs.

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